In my holiday, I did a lot of things, this holiday, I am very busy, very happy, this is a fun, busy weekend.
On Saturday morning, I got up early, I do my homework. In the afternoon, I went to the library, in the reading of a book. In the evening I with my parents watch TV. In the afternoon of Sunday, I with mother go to Jiushan Park, I am very happy to play. In the evening, I play computer games at home.This is a happy holiday, this is my holiday.
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Today, the weather does not alternate very much. I and the schoolmate go out to picnic together!
We have been arriving at Shan Shang , the gentle breeze has been boasting lightly , have been feeling comfortable extremely!
We have brought a good deal food and drink along!
We eat as well as chatting , have good good time.